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Sunday, 29 May 2016

The anonymous cat

The fact I was running so fast 
that I felt like my legs 
were going to fall off.

I thought it was all a dream.
But it wasn't.
It looked like a...a 
Giant  Alien cat.

I only just dodged it's big, furry, paw.
And if I hadn't, 
I would have been 
as flat as a pancake 

I was too focused 
on staying alive 
I didn't even realise there was a wall
right in front of me.

So I ran straight into it.
Where am l?
Am I in space?




4 comments:

  1. I really like the fact l was running so fast that l felt like my legs were going to fall of good job Jayden on that paragraph 😄

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  2. I really like this I eve Jay. The questioning at the end is great. Mum xx

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  3. I really like this Jay. The questioning at the end is great. Mum xx

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  4. I like how you described how you felt and the imagination you put in to it.

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