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Wednesday, 7 June 2017

Near death experience.

Swirling around like crazy, pretty much speaking an unknown language and... wait! Let me tell you how I got in this situation from the start. It was a pretty rainy day and my nana, my brother and I were going to the pool, which my nana suggested as soon as I’d got the TV remote and sat down. So after about 5 minutes we jumped in the car and off we go. It took us about 20 minutes to get to Rolleston and when we did I got in my togs and got straight into the lazy river. So I do a few laps until my nana comes in and shouts to me “JAY, WE’RE GOING INTO THE SPA NOW!” and my reply is “NO!” and I went in the deep pool instead. And this is where it starts to get bad. My brother comes in and I had no idea what was going to happen next (which is obvious because I don't have time traveling powers or anything like that). Then my brother shouts “LET’S GO WRESTLE!”. So we do, and obviously my brother jumped on my head, wouldn't get off and nearly drowned me! I survived by prising his hands off me and swimming out of his reach. And that's how I survived to write this story today.

The end


While I was writing this I was learning about punctuation and how to use my bright sparks. I would put myself on extended abstract for punctuation because I put commas and full stops where they needed to and used speech marks when someone was talking, I also help other people with punctuation and spelling.

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